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Posted 3/22/2008 9:46:35 PM


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I Remember…



I remember when we were children,
Oh, how we would laugh and play…
Now we are no longer children,
Because time took that away…


I remember when we were teenagers,
Oh, how we would cruz the town…
But, we’re no longer teenagers,
Because time had let us down…


I remember the night of the party,
you were swaying high and low…
You whispered don’t worry baby,
I’ll make it, I’ll drive real slow…


I remember how I begged and begged,
Pleading for you to stay…
For that was the last time I seen you,
Because time took You away...





I remember…


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Posted 4/2/2008 9:29:35 PM
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I love your Poem its great
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Posted 4/3/2008 7:28:16 PM


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Thank you, I've got thousands of poems.... ~soft smile~ I've been writing since I was 9.
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Posted 4/13/2008 9:35:49 PM


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i loved your poem i remember kind of it home
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Posted 4/14/2008 2:20:41 AM
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very nice

touching.
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