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Posted 8/12/2003 11:33:38 AM
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Released
written by Midnight~
For a long time, one stood..frozen and watching.unable to move....
Unable to release the fear and pain locked within....
Protective walls built high around a fair beauty asleep…
Guards that halted with issued commands to stop….

Undaunted by walls ,covered with thorns , One made a path
Revealing what Others had forsaken to see…
The key to reopen windows long shuttered from light…
Tearing down cobwebs revealing One at midnight…

In the night, He could see all through her eyes
A strength, He could illuminate for her to rebuild.
He stripped away all power from her grasp
Making her free and safe to find rebirth at last..

He showed her His way with a strong gentle hand
Loving and nurturing , open and honest
Peeling away tattered old ways ..nightmares from the past
Clothed her in a loving heart before taking His control.

Securely binding , gently restricting …
Lending support while wrapped in His touch
Urging her with kisses and longing
Demanding walls crumble and open to Him

Giving her heart , mind , body and soul
Releasing her to bend to His complete loving control
A willing slave she yielded to all of His needs.
Discovering pleasure and joy in the inner peace.

Bound to Him there could be no Other
Her fears , desires , sex all given
Beauty emerged fully owned
His slave now and forever to be known

**Proud the falcon wants to be, not trained to be, Mine.**



her Breath
by sweet intoxication

In the depths of the darkness she hides.....longing for that One to come and find her....to work and search for her.....she hears the Many tearing at the thorn covered vines that dress the walls but, so Many turn away from the endless cuts and bruises .They endure to get to her....They hear her cry from the depths of the blackness but, they turn away too soon.....then she sees the small dancing of a distant flame...does someOne dare to venture where none have before...she inhaled deeply and blew softly a small intoxicating breeze and the flicker went out.....she heard the quiet sigh and the flame danced again yet grew this time....she heard His cries....His frustrating struggles to push through the thorns as they cut into His flesh....she peered from the darkness...protected by the walls of thorns....He saw the light in her eyes...the softness of her skin and she blew softly again....the flame flickered and danced a bit before going out....her lips curled into a soft smile as she heard the sigh and the darkness came again....Once more she heard the groans and pains before she stepped into the flickering light once again....His eyes glimmer with tears as He never ceased in tearing down the thorn covered vines around her....she stood and allowed Him to reach her...just a few thin vines of thorns separated Tthem....He pushed those into her....she cried out but didn't run....the blood trickled down her body as He pushed harder....she inhaled and blew the dancing flame....This time she had to take more and more of herself to extinguish the flame that danced in His hand.....it went out... she sank into the depths of the sea of blackness....with the same patience and love as before ...He pressed forward and took the thorns into Himself as He searched the darkness once again for her....softly He heard her cries that paved His way to her.....she shivered in the depths of the darkness as He approached...ready to blow out the flame once again....but this time....she couldn't even breathe....she couldn't move as He held the flame to her lips....His body covered in the pains of His journey to find the real her....she huddled her small bruised and battered body into the center of the darkness....she trembled as her breath failed her...she felt herself going cold as He sat and watched her gasp for air....her eyes growing dark as she started into the burning flame....her skin like porcelain ..as she sank into the depths of herself and this life she had known....He let her take her last struggling breath before His eyes.......then.....gently ..He cradled her in His arms and laid her over the stone ground....the light went out...and she was gone.....His tears welled in His eyes and spilled over the chiseled features of His face....quiet whispers that only the heavens could hear flooded from His lips.....lifting her in His arms He pushed back through the thorn dressed vines....the thorns seemed to reach out and grab for her...not wanting to let her go....the darkness began to wail out in agony as the strong One took her from it....occasionally the thorns took their hold and cut her.....spilling her life's blood....He just pressed forward holding her tighter...crying out as the cuts and beatings of the thorns and darkness attacked Him....they wanted her back...they were determined to imprison her for all eternity....on the edge of the thorn covered walls He laid her to the ground....He cried to the heavens once more...held His breath and let His loving gaze fall upon her.....His heart began to pound in His chest as it drank the last of His life from Him as well....then the light flickered in His eyes....and He inhaled....her chest rose....He exhaled...her chest fell....slowly He drank of the air about Him and watched as He began to breathe for her....He stayed knelt beside her...quietly watching ..slowly letting His breathing fill her with life once again.....this time...she woke...the light that lit up the darkness could not be blown out....Her very breath was His......when she tried ..He held back the breath.....her lips curled into a bright smile and the light within His hand became the light within her eyes.....He would let her be the light that would shine in the depths of Midnight....and He would be the Only darkness that imprisioned her......she was home.




a journey together....a path to becoming As One....





~~Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away!~~



His falcon lifted by Love, giving all because i freely give to the freedom within being bound to Him~








Lead me into the darkest corners of Your desires and i'll unlock and feed what lives inside...

*Through the fires of His hand, through the tears they both cried, through the love that sealed Eternity....from submissive to slave...she is now born....the birth of a legacy....*

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Posted 8/12/2003 6:55:02 PM


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~steps in and reads the posting from my big sister~
beautiful as always sweetie...i love reading your work *leaves hlks for you*

~leaves a message for your Master as well~

Midnight~
that was so very sweet...Yyou Ttwo are definately a perfect Mmatch *winks and leaves a hug for You*
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Posted 8/12/2003 9:02:24 PM


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to Midnight and s~i,
how beautiful....the struggle of Ttwo trying to get to Eeach Oother...the thorns signifying the protection around one's heart...and One tearing away the vines of mistrust that has built up in one...
~wipes the tear from my eye~
i was very touched by this...and could truly feel the struggle of one....as one resisted...but then surrendered to One...
thank Yyou for sharing.
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Posted 8/12/2003 9:37:30 PM


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sweet~intoxication

I am the person who has lived only in your dreams.
Or perhaps your nightmares.
Many emotions now surging in your breast….you do not understand.

There is awe, fear, need and others you dare not explore too closely for you might recognize them for what they are.

you come before Me on bended knee .
you want to taste the leather of My boots upon your lips...
you seek .the heavenly feel of My crop upon your bare buttocks.

I see you look upon Me with fear and wonder but most of all, respect.
The world you know , I could destroy with ease.
It would fall like a house of cards in a gentle breeze..
Yet… you look into My eyes...and are reassured by all you see.

For just as My demands upon you are without negotiation ...
So, too, is the trust you have placed in Me.

At times, you seek Me as does the child its mother.
you seek Me because you know deep, deep down inside,
where you never allow anyOone else to see...
you… can fly only when you are beneath My boots..
you are free only when you are in My chains.

The submission you give to Me, you give freely, and as a gift.
I accept it, knowing what you have given Me is a part of your soul.
It shall be treated as such... the sweetest gift I shall ever own.

you are My submissive... I your Dominant.
Wwe are Ttwo who are on a journey.

What so ever the world may send your way,
Be it good times or bad, this simple fact shall never alter.
Regardless of honors the world may lay at your feet,
Or grief it may heap upon your brow ...

The truth is that …you know that you have found the truest form of freedom ...
in the words ...

"Yes Master"


**Proud the falcon wants to be, not trained to be, Mine.**


~ We all walk in the dark and each of us must
learn to turn on his or her own light. ~

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Posted 8/13/2003 3:33:03 PM


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~crawls in carrying a single petal of a magnolia within the delicate hold of my lips....letting it fall upon Your chair...smiling brightly as i hear Your words and knows nothing more to say than


Yes Master!!




~~Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away!~~



His falcon lifted by Love, giving all because i freely give to the freedom within being bound to Him~






This message was edited by sweet~intoxication on 8-13-03 @ 3:33 PM

Lead me into the darkest corners of Your desires and i'll unlock and feed what lives inside...

*Through the fires of His hand, through the tears they both cried, through the love that sealed Eternity....from submissive to slave...she is now born....the birth of a legacy....*

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Posted 8/13/2003 5:01:00 PM


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*slipping in for a short spell, a faint smile upon My full lips as I see birdie smile ever so softly, stunned by the glow of her skin, amazed at the light I see in her eyes that I've never seen in her before. shaking My head in disbelief, deep in My heart feeling a slight pang of jealousy, wishing that Aall could have something as beautiful as what Tthey share.. And yet.. My heart just spills over, a warmth that fills Me in knowing that she is free. the submissive, the slave, the phoenix that has risen again, pleased that the embers have died around her, tickled that He takes such care to see that the ashes are all wiped away from her..

laying soft kisses upon My fingers, blowing it off of My flesh towards the heavens, knowing that the meanbeams will carry them through the night, until they land upon the bird's wings so she can carry them to share with her Master*
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Posted 8/15/2003 9:54:42 AM


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softly smiles........thanks for sharing .......Midnight & s~i....

~~showing my better side~~
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Posted 8/26/2003 8:12:57 AM


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Midnight Pathway

As she sits in the darkness
She thinks of her life
Of the paths taken
Of the paths chosen.
She looks at where she is in life
And wonders about whom she really is
A mother, a friend...
A wife, a lover...
But who she is
She’s still trying to find.


As she sits in the darkness
She thinks about her life
Which path she is on now
What path will be chosen?
Does she set herself free?
And shall she shout …this is the real me?
Should she tell those who care and love her who and what she wants to be?


As she sits in the darkness
Not knowing the path she will take
She hears the voice within telling her
This is the path to be chosen
Still she holds back and silences the voice within
For she fears what will become of her life if she tells who she really is.


Listening in the darkness
Hearing the voice she obeys
Her heart opens to the sound of Midnight
And trusting in her heart takes flight singing the words

“I'm me sitting in the darkness, waiting, wanting and yearning to be the real me. I’m free.”


**Proud the falcon wants to be, not trained to be, Mine.**


~ We all walk in the dark and each of us must
learn to turn on his or her own light. ~

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Posted 8/28/2003 8:46:57 AM


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Master,

Your pet has struggled with words that just won't come to her. You never cease to leave me speechless with Your loving words and insight into what i try to hide. In a very short time You have come into my life and swept through it with a great force. Knocking down walls and revealing more that were deeply covered by those You shattered. Through You i am discovering a part of me that has long since coward in the depths of me. Hiding...fearful....always lurking and looking over the walls....dearing to reveal the inner beauty. Most times hints of who one is would try to emerge only to run and hide back into the darkness that offered the greatest protection and comfort. Little did i know i was hiding from myself more than the scary unknown. Thank You my One. You are the breath that fuels my being.


~~Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away!~~



His falcon lifted by Love, giving all because i freely give to the freedom within being bound to Him~








Lead me into the darkest corners of Your desires and i'll unlock and feed what lives inside...

*Through the fires of His hand, through the tears they both cried, through the love that sealed Eternity....from submissive to slave...she is now born....the birth of a legacy....*

Post #665371
Posted 9/6/2003 9:17:37 PM


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Firewind

Reaching into the depths
Battling ghosts of the past
No longer to rule your soul
Healing wounds
Hurts slow to heal
Walls built up
Surrounding your heart
Causing love to stall
Now can be seen to burn
Wanting to be free
Released to One
Love yearns
To freely give
Giving more than before
Closed doors ..wide open
Souls precious light peering through
Eyes, hands, spirit revealing to One
All can see it, can feel it ...breaking out
Out of the bondage tearing open the gates
Running to One's arms true and sound
Letting loose the flood tide
Flying , leaping with bound delight
Soaring through the firewind of Midnight
**Proud the falcon wants to be, not trained to be, Mine.**


~ We all walk in the dark and each of us must
learn to turn on his or her own light. ~

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