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Freed
tangled~and~dark
1/9/2016   
 
Member Freed

How easily that you command my body.
One look can put me on my knees.
A word and my flesh heats.
Your touch, your fingers on my skin
Pulls the involuntary plea from my lips.
What freedom is this
To yield without thought?
No longer a sentient creature,
But sensual,
Quivering with need,
Hope, lust and even love.
There is only this moment in time.
This place.
You.
Only and always you.
You freed my body
So I now plead with you to
Free my mind.
Free me of the guilt,
The shame and the doubt.
Absolve me of my reticence
To relinquish fully to you
What is yours and
What will always been yours.
Guide me,
Teach me,
Command and demand
Until I am complete.
The completeness that will only come
With the yielding,
The giving,
The submission
That I lay at your feet[size=3]
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Post #1028437 Back to top ▲
1/9/2016
 
Freed

How easily that you command my body.
One look can put me on my knees.
A word and my flesh heats.
Your touch, your fingers on my skin
Pulls the involuntary plea from my lips.
What freedom is this
To yield without thought?
No longer a sentient creature,
But sensual,
Quivering with need,
Hope, lust and even love.
There is only this moment in time.
This place.
You.
Only and always you.
You freed my body
So I now plead with you to
Free my mind.
Free me of the guilt,
The shame and the doubt.
Absolve me of my reticence
To relinquish fully to you
What is yours and
What will always been yours.
Guide me,
Teach me,
Command and demand
Until I am complete.
The completeness that will only come
With the yielding,
The giving,
The submission
That I lay at your feet[size=3]
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Post #1028437
~Knighthawk
2/26/2016   
 
Member
This is beautiful! I especially loved this line...."Absolve me of my reticence." Now that, is poetry. *S*
Post #1029461 Back to top ▲
2/26/2016
 
~Knighthawk
Member
This is beautiful! I especially loved this line...."Absolve me of my reticence." Now that, is poetry. *S*
Post #1029461
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